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Sol-Caninus Dec 19, 2013   Traditional Artist
First impressions to coax sober reflection after the intoxicating praise (I'm sure this sexy doll will inspire a lot of praise!):  

1)  The placement of the figure is too high with the head too close to the top border.  The figure is cropped acceptably, so I'd reduce it within the borders using the rule of thirds to place the head.
2)  As is, the breasts are well placed to be the center of interest - though they should not be.
3) the high contrast and placement of the crotch competes for center of interest.
4)  The center of interest should be the head/face/eyes.  The pattern is one of emerging clarity from the legs upward - but this pattern seems to reverse after achieving maximum clarity at the breasts.  The hair and face begin to soften and fade, when it would be more effective if they sharpened.  All those blending tones are to blame.  Eliminate and separate so that the details/textures of head and face are sharper/clearer than those of the breasts.
5)  The diagonal light, medium and dark zones of the page are too equal.  I suggest beefing up the dark zone by extending it downward so that it doesn't carry the eye into the  "eye trap" top left corner.  The edge of this dark zone can be thought of as a directional line and it is never a good idea to run a line into a corner unless there is a good reason for it.  (Here there isn't.)
6) Light against light and dark against dark are weak arrangements.  You want that in the fog area, sure.  But not above that where the atmosphere clears.
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vixenw Dec 13, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
fabulous ))))
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nicely done Love
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GabAroa Dec 9, 2013  Student Digital Artist
wow this is really impressive!
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ArtOfWei Dec 9, 2013  Professional General Artist
Cool.
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you can make a gal Gadot wonder woman  with batman vs superman 
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Zhaanman Dec 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Wicked design amazing pose and evil glare :evillaugh: Ha Love it!!!
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IsaiahParker Dec 9, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Outstanding!
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